{"id":54619,"date":"2019-12-30T00:00:00","date_gmt":"2019-12-29T21:00:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/prohoster.info\/blog\/blog_prohoster\/kak-pisat-lyogkie-teksty"},"modified":"2020-02-18T14:02:39","modified_gmt":"2020-02-18T11:02:39","slug":"kak-pisat-lyogkie-teksty","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/prohoster.info\/et\/blog\/novosti-interneta\/kak-pisat-lyogkie-teksty","title":{"rendered":"Kuidas kirjutada kergeid tekste","gt_translate_keys":[{"key":"rendered","format":"text"}]},"content":{"rendered":"

Ma kirjutan palju tekste, peamiselt igasuguseid jaburusi, kuid tavaliselt \u00fctlevad isegi kriitikud, et tekst on h\u00f5lpsasti loetav. Kui soovite oma tekste (n\u00e4iteks kirju) lihtsamaks muuta, tulge siia.<\/p>\n

Siin ma ei ole midagi v\u00e4lja m\u00f5elnud, k\u00f5ik tuleb Nora Gal'i raamatust \u201eElav ja surnud s\u00f5na\u201d, n\u00f5ukogude t\u00f5lkijalt, toimetajalt ja kriitikult.<\/a><\/noindex><\/p>\n

Reeglid on kaks: tegevuss\u00f5na ja mitte- b\u00fcrokraatlik keel.<\/p>\n

Tegevuss\u00f5na on tegevus. Tegevuss\u00f5na muudab teksti d\u00fcnaamiliseks, huvitavaks ja elavaks. \u00dckski teine s\u00f5naliik ei suuda seda teha.<\/p>\n

Tegevuss\u00f5na anton\u00fc\u00fcm on tegevuss\u00f5nastatud nimis\u00f5na. See on k\u00f5ige hullem kuri. Tegevuss\u00f5nastatud nimis\u00f5na on nimis\u00f5na, mis on tuletatud tegevuss\u00f5nast.<\/p>\n

N\u00e4iteks: rakendamine, teostamine, planeerimine, implementeerimine, kohaldamine jne.<\/p>\n

Tegevuss\u00f5nastatud nimis\u00f5nast hullem on tegevuss\u00f5nastatud nimis\u00f5nade jada. N\u00e4iteks, planeerimise teostamine, rakendamise implementeerimine.<\/p>\n

Reegel on lihtne: seal, kus on v\u00f5imalik, asendage tegevuss\u00f5nastatud nimis\u00f5nad tegevuss\u00f5nadega. V\u00f5i normaalsete nimis\u00f5nadega, millel pole tegevuss\u00f5na s\u00fcnon\u00fc\u00fcmi.<\/p>\n

N\u00fc\u00fcd r\u00e4\u00e4gime b\u00fcrokraatiast. Et teada saada, v\u00f5i t\u00e4psemalt \u00f6elda \u2014 meenutada, mis on b\u00fcrokraatia, lugesite m\u00f5nest seadusest, m\u00e4\u00e4rusest (sealhulgas ettev\u00f5tte sisemistest dokumentidest) v\u00f5i oma diplomist.<\/p>\n

B\u00fcrokraatia on teksti kunstlik keerukus, et see n\u00e4iks targem v\u00f5i sobituks mingitesse raamidesse (\u00e4ri-, teaduslik- ja publitsistlik stiil jne).<\/p>\n

Lihtsamalt \u00f6eldes, kui p\u00fc\u00fcate kirjutades n\u00e4ha v\u00e4lja targem, kui olete, siis loote b\u00fcrokraatiat.<\/p>\n

Verbi\u00f5iguslike nimis\u00f5nade kasutamine on samuti b\u00fcrokraatia. Osalised ja gerundi m\u00f5isted on b\u00fcrokraatia tunnuseks. Eriti siis, kui on jutt keerukatest lausetest, lisanditest, keerulisest ja alamsisestustelauseid (tule, meenuta kooliprogrammi).<\/p>\n

Osalised ja gerundi m\u00f5isted erinevad sellest, et neil on, \u00fctleme nii, alus-s\u00f5na. N\u00e4iteks: Irina, probleemiga tegelev. See juba k\u00f5lab natuke kohati, kuid soovi korral v\u00f5ib muuta selle t\u00e4ielikult loetamatuks.<\/p>\n

Irina, probleemi lahendades, meenutab v\u00e4ikest, mitte midagi m\u00f5istvat last, kes arvab, et teab millegist selles m\u00fcstilises elus, mis tundub tulevat kusagilt, (niisiis, ta on ise juba segaduses\u2026), uskudes siiralt, et tema \u00f5igust kuuluva arvuti eel\u00f5htusest vihmast haisv naabrina j\u00e4\u00e4b igaveseks tema k\u00f5rval, taludes ja vaikides, kunagi mitte hambaid n\u00e4idates, nagu koer, kes l\u00f5hnab inetu s\u00e4ilivuse j\u00e4rgi (kurrat, mida ma selle lausega \u00f6elda tahtsin\u2026)<\/p>\n

\u00dchest k\u00fcljest v\u00f5ib s\u00fcveneda ja need reeglid selgeks teha ning kirjutada nagu Lev Tolstoj, lauseid, mis ulatuvad lehek\u00fcljeni. Et p\u00e4rast oleksid koolilapsed piinatud.<\/p>\n

Aga on lihtne v\u00e4ljap\u00e4\u00e4s, mis ei lase sul lauset rikkuda. Tee laused l\u00fchikeseks. Mitte 'H\u00e4mardus.', muidugi - arvan, et piisab \u00fchest-kahest reast, mitte rohkem. Seda reeglit j\u00e4rgides ei l\u00e4he sa segadusse.<\/p>\n

Jah, ja l\u00f5igud on parem teha v\u00e4iksemateks. Kaasaegses maailmas on tegemist nn \"klipim\u00f5tlemisega\" \u2014 inimene ei suuda omandada suuri informatsiooni koguseid. Tuleb jagada nagu lapsele, t\u00fckeldades kotleti v\u00e4ikesteks t\u00fckkideks, et ta saaks neid ise oma kahvliga s\u00fc\u00fca. Ja kui ei jaga, siis tuleb istuda k\u00f5rval ja toita.<\/p>\n

Aga edasi on lihtne. J\u00e4rgmine kord, kui kirjutate teksti, looge see enne saatmist \u00fcle ja leidke: verbiga seotud nimis\u00f5nad, osalused ja osaliste laused, laused, mis on pikemad kui \u00fcks rida, l\u00f5igud, mis on paksemad kui viis rida. Ja tehke need \u00fcmber.
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