{"id":54619,"date":"2019-12-30T00:00:00","date_gmt":"2019-12-29T21:00:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/prohoster.info\/blog\/blog_prohoster\/kak-pisat-lyogkie-teksty"},"modified":"2020-02-18T14:02:39","modified_gmt":"2020-02-18T11:02:39","slug":"kak-pisat-lyogkie-teksty","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/prohoster.info\/ro\/blog\/news\/kak-pisat-lyogkie-teksty","title":{"rendered":"Cum s\u0103 scrii texte u\u0219oare","gt_translate_keys":[{"key":"rendered","format":"text"}]},"content":{"rendered":"

Scriu multe texte, \u00een principal tot felul de bazaconii, dar, de obicei, chiar \u0219i du\u0219manii spun c\u0103 textul se cite\u0219te u\u0219or. Dac\u0103 vrei s\u0103-\u021bi faci textele (de exemplu, scrisorile) mai u\u0219or de citit, gr\u0103be\u0219te-te aici.<\/p>\n

Aici nu am inventat nimic, totul este din cartea \u201eCuv\u00e2ntul viu \u0219i mort\u201d de Nora Gal, traduc\u0103toare, redactor \u0219i critic sovietic.<\/a><\/noindex><\/p>\n

Regulile sunt dou\u0103: verbul \u0219i f\u0103r\u0103 b\u00e2lciuri.<\/p>\n

Verbul este o ac\u021biune. Verbul face textul dinamic, interesant, viu. Nici o alt\u0103 parte de vorbire nu poate face asta.<\/p>\n

Antonymul verbului este substantivul verbal. Aceasta este cea mai \u00eengrozitoare ur\u00e2ciune. Substantivul verbal este un substantiv derivat din verb.<\/p>\n

De exemplu: realizare, aplicare, planificare, implementare, utilizare etc.<\/p>\n

Cea mai ur\u00e2t\u0103 form\u0103 a substantivului verbal este o lan\u021b de substantive verbale. De exemplu, realizarea planific\u0103rii, implementarea aplic\u0103rii.<\/p>\n

Regula este simpl\u0103: acolo unde se poate, \u00eenlocuie\u0219te substantivele verbale cu verbe. Sau cu substantive normale, care nu au sinonime verbale.<\/p>\n

Acum despre b\u00e2lciuri. Pentru a afla, sau mai bine zis, pentru a-\u021bi aminti ce este b\u00e2lciul, cite\u0219te vreo lege, reglementare (inclusiv documente interne ale companiei), sau diploma ta.<\/p>\n

B\u00e2lciul este o complicare artificial\u0103 a textului, astfel \u00eenc\u00e2t s\u0103 par\u0103 inteligent sau s\u0103 se \u00eencadreze \u00een anumite tipare (stil de afaceri, \u0219tiin\u021bific-publicistic etc.).<\/p>\n

Spun\u00e2nd simplu, dac\u0103 \u00eencerci s\u0103 pari mai de\u0219tept dec\u00e2t e\u0219ti c\u00e2nd scrii un text, produci b\u00e2lci.<\/p>\n

Utilizarea substantivelor verbale este de asemenea b\u00e2lci. Formele gerundive \u0219i participiale sunt un semn al b\u00e2lciului. \u00cen special, atunci c\u00e2nd exist\u0103 un lan\u021b de forme, complemente, propozi\u021bii compuse \u0219i subordonate (hai, aminti\u021bi-v\u0103 materia de \u0219coal\u0103).<\/p>\n

Formele gerundive \u0219i participiale se deosebesc prin faptul c\u0103 au, s\u0103 spunem, un cuv\u00e2nt de baz\u0103. De exemplu: Irina, rezolv\u00e2nd o problem\u0103. Deja sun\u0103 pu\u021bin ciudat, dar, cu dorin\u021b\u0103, poate fi f\u0103cut complet ilizibil.<\/p>\n

Irina, care rezolv\u0103 o problem\u0103, \u00eemi aminte\u0219te de un copil mic, care nu \u00een\u021belege nimic, crez\u00e2nd c\u0103 \u0219tie ceva despre aceast\u0103 via\u021b\u0103, ap\u0103rut\u0103 din senin, care i-a c\u0103zut \u00een cap (cumva, s-a \u00eencurcat deja\u2026), crez\u00e2nd cu sinceritate c\u0103 computerul, care \u00eei apar\u021bine prin drept, va suporta \u0219i va tolera ve\u0219nic, t\u0103c\u00e2nd, f\u0103r\u0103 s\u0103 fi ar\u0103tat vreodat\u0103 din\u021bii, ca un c\u00e2ine mirosind a ploaia de ieri (of, ce voiam s\u0103 spun cu aceast\u0103 propozi\u021bie\u2026).<\/p>\n

Pe de o parte, po\u021bi s\u0103 te \u00eenv\u00e2r\u021bi \u0219i s\u0103 te l\u0103mure\u0219ti cu aceste reguli \u0219i s\u0103 scrii, ca Lev Tolstoi, fraze de o pagin\u0103. Ca s\u0103 se chinuie ulterior elevii.<\/p>\n

Dar exist\u0103 o solu\u021bie simpl\u0103, care nu te va face s\u0103 strici propozi\u021bia. F\u0103 frazele scurte. Nu \u201eSe \u00eentuneca.\u201d, desigur \u2013 cred c\u0103 ar fi suficient fraze lungi de o-dou\u0103 r\u00e2nduri, nu mai mult. Respect\u00e2nd aceast\u0103 regul\u0103, nu te vei \u00eencurca.<\/p>\n

Da, \u0219i paragrafele ar trebui s\u0103 fie mici. \u00cen lumea modern\u0103 exist\u0103 ceea ce se nume\u0219te \u201eg\u00e2ndirea clip\u201d, \u2014 oamenii nu pot absorbi buc\u0103\u021bi mari de informa\u021bie. Trebuie, ca un copil, s\u0103 \u00eempar\u021bi friptura \u00een buc\u0103\u021bi mici, ca s\u0103 poat\u0103 s\u0103 le m\u0103n\u00e2nce singur, cu furculi\u021ba lui. \u0218i dac\u0103 nu o \u00eempar\u021bi, va trebui s\u0103 stai l\u00e2ng\u0103 el \u0219i s\u0103-l hr\u0103ne\u0219ti.<\/p>\n

Ei bine, \u0219i apoi este simplu. Data viitoare c\u00e2nd scrii un text, cite\u0219te-l din nou \u00eenainte de a-l trimite \u0219i caut\u0103: substantivele derivate din verbe, participiile \u0219i gerunziile, propozi\u021biile mai lungi de o linie, paragrafele mai groase de cinci r\u00e2nduri. \u0218i ref\u0103-le.
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