Sicinga ngabalinganiswa bomdlalo kunye neengxoxo sisebenzisa iingcebiso zababhali kunye nomzekelo wabaxhasi bethiyori yoMhlaba osicaba.

Njengomntu oqale ukwenza umdlalo wakhe wokuqala njengento yokuzonwabisa ngaphandle kwamava enkqubo, bendihlala ndifunda izifundo ezahlukeneyo kunye nezikhokelo kuphuhliso lomdlalo. Kwaye njengomntu ovela kwi-PR kunye ne-journalism ehlala esebenza ngokubhaliweyo, ndifuna iskripthi kunye nabalinganiswa, kwaye kungekhona nje i-gameplay mechanics. Siza kuqwalasela ukuba ndiliguqulele eli nqaku kum, njengesikhumbuzo, kodwa kulungile ukuba omnye umntu ulifumanise liluncedo.

Ikwaphonononga isimilo sabalinganiswa kusetyenziswa umzekelo wabaxhasi bethiyori yoMhlaba osicaba.

Isikripthi sefilimu ethi "Apocalypse Ngoku" (1979) esekwe kwincwadi ethi "Intliziyo yobumnyama" (1899) nguJoseph Conrad.

I ngcaciso

Ndisebenza kumdlalo onabalinganiswa abaninzi. Kodwa ukubhala abalinganiswa ayisiyosuti yam eyomeleleyo, ndiye ndaqala ukudibana nababhali bokwenyani. Iingxelo zabo zixabisekile.

Sadibana kwizitrato ezixakekileyo, sahlala kwiindawo zokushicilela ngaphezulu kweepayinti, sithumela i-imeyile kwaye saxoxa. Ndikhe ndadibana nabantu abanezimvo ezahlukeneyo kumbandela omnye. Kodwa ndiye ndakwazi ukuchonga amanqaku ambalwa ngokubanzi kwisiseko sokubhala abalinganiswa.

Ngoku ndiza kubonisa amanqaku am aphuma kwiintlanganiso zababhali kwaye ndiwancedise ngeengcinga ezivela kwincwadi kaJohn Yorke Into The Woods - loo manqaku aya kumakishwa ngesifinyezo esithi ITW. Ndiyathemba ukuba ziya kuba luncedo.

Umlinganiswa vs. Iimpawu

Embindini womlinganiswa kukungquzulana phakathi kwendlela esifuna ukubonwa ngayo kunye nendlela esiziva ngayo [ITW]. Okanye ngamanye amazwi: ingxabano phakathi kweempawu zethu (umfanekiso) kunye nomlingiswa wethu wokwenyani kusentliziyweni yayo yonke into (idrama).

Ngoko ke, ukuze umlingiswa abe nomdla kwaye ajikeleze kakuhle, kufuneka angqubuzane ngandlela-thile. Kufuneka abe nomfanekiso weempawu azijonga njengencedo (ngokuqaphela okanye hayi) kwaye ekuhambeni kwexesha ziqala ukumphazamisa. Ukuze aphumelele, kuya kufuneka anikezele.

Kwaye ngelixa begcina umfanekiso wabo, abalinganiswa bathetha ngendlela abafuna ukubonakala ngayo emehlweni abanye [ITW].

Ukubhala iingxoxo

Xa umlinganiswa ethetha okanye esenza into engaqhelekanga ngokupheleleyo, idrama iyenzeka. Ingxoxo akufanele ichaze ngokulula ukuziphatha, akufuneki ichaze ukuba umlinganiswa ucinga ntoni na - kufuneka ibonise umlingiswa, kungekhona umlinganiswa.

Isitshixo kwincoko yendalo kukuba unomlinganiswa onokuthi ucinge entlokweni yakho, kunokuba ucinge ngomgca ngamnye. Shiya ukusebenza ngeentambo zexesha elizayo. Ababhali abaninzi bahlala nephepha elingenanto kwaye bacinge malunga nokuba umlingiswa wabo uya kuthini. Endaweni yoko, dala umlinganiswa othetha ngokwakhe.

Ngoko ke into yokuqala kukwakha umlinganiswa.

Ukwenza umlinganiswa, kufuneka ujonge umlingiswa kwii-engile ezininzi kangangoko. Nantsi nje imibuzo embalwa yomlinganiswa onokuthi uzibuze yona (olu ayiloluhlu olupheleleyo okanye olungcono, kodwa yindawo elungileyo yokuqalisa):

• Unjani phambi kwabantu? Unobubele, unomsindo okhawulezayo, uhlala engxamile?
• Xa eyedwa kwindlu yangasese, kude nabantu bonke, ziziphi iingcinga ezifika kuqala engqondweni yakhe?
• Uvelaphi kwaye uyaphi? Ngaba usuka kwindawo ehlwempuzekileyo okanye etyebileyo? Uthule okanye uxakekile? Ngaba ukrazukile phakathi kwabo?
• Uthanda ntoni? Yintoni angayithandiyo? Ukuba uthe wafika ngosuku waza wayalelwa ukutya angakuthandiyo, uya kusabela njani?
• Angakwazi ukuqhuba? Ngaba uyakuthanda ukuqhuba? Iziphatha njani endleleni?
• Wafumana ifoto yakhe endala: kuxhomekeke ekubeni ifoto ithathwe nini yaye nabani, wayeza kusabela njani?

Kwaye nangokunjalo. Iimpendulo ezininzi onazo malunga nomlinganiswa, kokukhona uba nzulu kwaye unyanzeliseka ngakumbi. Ekugqibeleni, umlinganiswa uya kucaca kakhulu ukuba uya kubhala incoko yakhe.

Owasetyhini, phakathi kwama-26 nama-29 eminyaka ubudala. Ebudeni beminyaka yakhe yesikolo, ubomi bakhe babukruqula. Wayenabahlobo abambalwa waza wasishiya isixeko ngokukhawuleza emva kokuphumelela. Kwindawo entsha, uba nesibindi aze agqibe kwelokuba aye kusela. Kukho amawaka abantu kwisixeko esikhulu kwaye amathuba okudibana nomntu aphezulu kakhulu. Ungena kwindawo yentselo. Kufuneka atyhale phakathi kwesihlwele. Ngequbuliso uqaphela ukuba ngoyena ungekho fashonini ekusekweni. Kumthatha ixesha ukufumana isihlalo esingenamntu. Ekugqibeleni, uhlala phantsi. Kwiiyure ezimbini kamva, kufika indoda kuye.

“Unjani?” uyabuza.

Uyaphendula: “Kulungile. Enkosi".

“Nam yonke into ihamba kakuhle,” itsho le ndoda.

“Eh, ndiyabona,” utshilo. Indoda ilungisa umqala.

Kucacile ukuba indoda izithembile kunaye. Akazange alinde ukuba abuzwe ukuba uqhuba njani. "Hmm, ndiyabona", yatsho intombazana. Ubhidekile. Okokuqala, ngenxa yokuba wayeziva engathandekiyo, kwaye okwesibini, ngenxa yokuba le ndoda yayingenabubele kuye. Wayengabuqhelanga ubomi obuxakekileyo basedolophini le ndoda eyakhulela kuyo. Wayelindele incoko ngesantya awayesiqhelile esixekweni. Wayibona impazamo yakhe waza waqalisa ukulungisa umqala eneentloni. Intsingiselo apha kukuba bobabini banokuninzi abanokufunda omnye komnye. Ubomi babo buhamba ngesantya esahlukileyo, yaye ukuba bafuna ukwenza abahlobo, kuya kufuneka bafunde baze bakhule.

Umzekelo omhle ngumboniso wokuvula kwifilimu ethi "Inethiwekhi yeNtlalo" (2010), apho abalinganiswa banxibelelana khona. Zininzi iividiyo ezinohlalutyo kukhangelo, ngoko andiyi kuziphinda.

Inethiwekhi yeNtlalo (2010, uDavid Fincher)

Ke, ukudala ingxoxo, kufuneka senze umlinganiswa. Ngandlela ithile, ukubhala incoko kukulingisa umlinganiswa. Ezo. Inkcazo yento anokuthi ayithethe umlinganiswa ukuba ebekho.

Iimbekiselo zoonobumba

Ukudala izinto, kufuneka ezinye izinto. Oku kusebenza nakwiinkalo zokuyila. Abantu ngabalinganiswa. Ungumlinganiswa. Ngoko ke kufuneka uthethe nabantu ukuze uqokelele imathiriyeli. Abantu bagcina amakhulu amabali obomi ngaphakathi kubo. Konke okufuneka ukwenze kukubuza kwaye phantse wonke umntu uya kukuvuyela ukukuxelela malunga nabo. Mamela nje ngenyameko.

Kanye kwindawo yokuthengisa ndafumana incoko nenxila. Wayekhe wangumphuhlisi olungileyo kunye nomthengisi. Waxelela into enye enomdla - ingcamango yakhe malunga nokuwohloka kwamadoda. Kwavakala ngolu hlobo: kwi-70s kunye ne-80s, iiklabhu zamadoda zaqala ukuvala ngobuninzi. Ngenxa yoku, babengenandawo yokuchitha ixesha kunye namanye amadoda (okuthetha ukuba ngaphandle kwabafazi nabafazi). Ngaphandle komnye - ababhuki. Ke ngoko, imfuno yokubheja yanda kakhulu, iiofisi ezintsha zavulwa ngokuxhuma kunye nemida, kwaye amadoda aye athotywa ngakumbi. Ndambuza ukuba ukuvalwa kwemigodi eMntla (kunye nentswela-ngqesho enkulu eyalandelayo) kube negalelo ekuveleni koobhuki. Wavuma, ekholisiwe koku kongezwa kwingcamango yakhe. Kodwa emva koko wabetha itempile yakhe ngomnwe wakhe wathi: “Kodwa abantu abafana nathi abayifuni le nto - uyazi, abantu abakrelekrele. Asichithi xesha kwaba babhuki. " Ngentloko yoloyiso, waginya into ekusenokwenzeka ukuba yayiyi-25 yepayinti yakhe yeveki. Emini, kwi-pub emdaka. Ungquzulwano lumntwisiwe.

U-Chuck Palahniuk, umbhali we-Fight Club, unokuthetha ngale nto iiyure. Qokelela kwaye ubalise kwakhona amabali abantu bokwenyani njengoko beqala ukuphila ubomi babo. Qiniseka ukuba ujonge nayiphi na imisebenzi kaChuck.

Kodwa ngaphezu kokunxibelelana nabantu bokwenene, kufuneka ufunde abanye ababhali, iiblogi ezingaziwa, uphulaphule iipodcasts zokuvuma, ukufunda abalinganiswa be-movie, njalo njalo.

Kukho i-documentary efana ne-Behind The Curve ("Emva kwe-Curve", i-2018) malunga neqela labaxhasi bethiyori ye-flat Earth. Ayingeni kwiinkcukacha ezininzi malunga neengcinga zabo, kodwa yifilimu enkulu yokuhlola abalinganiswa ngokwabo.

Omnye wabalinganiswa befilimu, uPatricia Steer, uqhuba isitishi sikaYouTube esizinikele kwiingxoxo malunga nethiyori yoMhlaba osicaba kunye noluntu ngokubanzi. Nangona kunjalo, akabonakali njengethiyori yeyelenqe konke konke. Ukongeza, wayengasoloko engumxhasi wethiyori, kodwa weza kuyo ngezinye iithiyori ezahlukeneyo zeyelenqe. Njengoko isitishi sakhe sasisiya sithandwa, iithiyori zeyelenqe zaqala ukuvela ngakuye.

Ingxaki yamalungu oluntu olunjalo kukuba iinkolelo zabo zihlala zigculelwa - "ihlabathi elikhulu, elibi" lihlala lichasene nabo. Kwimeko elolo hlobo, ngokwemvelo baqalisa ukuvakalelwa kukuba wonke umntu ongakholwayo ulutshaba. Kodwa oku kungasebenza nakwamanye amalungu oluntu. Ngokomzekelo, ukuba iinkolelo zabo zatshintsha ngesiquphe.

Kukho umzuzwana kwifilimu apho athi into efana (hayi igama negama): "Abantu bandibiza ngokuba licilikishe, besithi ndisebenzela i-FBI okanye ndingunopopi wombutho othile.".

Emva koko kufika umzuzu xa esemgubasini wokwazi. Uyambona ukuba uyabanda xa ecinga ukuba izinto abazithethayo ngaye zibubudenge kwaye aziyonyani. Kodwa wathetha into efanayo nangabanye abantu. Ngaba yayibubudenge? Kuthekani ukuba ithiyori yomhlaba caba ayiyonyani? Ngaba wayenyanisile ngalo lonke ixesha?

Emva koko ugqabhuko-dubulo olusengqiqweni bekufanele ukuba lwenzeke entlokweni yakhe, kodwa uzicima zonke iingcinga ngezimvo aze aqhubeke ekholelwa kwinto ayikholelwayo. Impixano phakathi komlinganiswa isandula ukuqhambuka kumlo wangaphakathi omkhulu kwaye icala elingenangqiqo liphumelele.

Yimizuzwana emihlanu emnandi leyo.

Abantu banokuba yingqokelela yokukhanya okungenakunqandwa kwemizuzwana emihlanu.

Ngenxa yoko,

Ngaba usajonge kwiphepha elingenanto uzibuza ukuba abalinganiswa bakho bazakuthini? Awukaphuhlisi isimilo sabo ngokwaneleyo ukuba bazithethelele. Kuya kufuneka uqale usebenze zonke iinkalo zomlinganiswa ukuze ube nencoko yababini. Kwaye ukukhangela ngokukhawuleza imibuzo yokwakha umlinganiswa yindawo elungileyo yokuqala.

Ngaba umlingiswa wakho ulungile, kodwa banyanzeliswa kakhulu kwaye bangathandeki? Ifuna impixano kunye nomfanekiso, ingxabano kunye nokubhideka.

Abalinganiswa benza abalinganiswa abatsha.

Jonga abalinganiswa abakungqongileyo kubomi bokwenyani.

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